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mind map

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no stock pictures used. all photos taken by me.

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© 2012 - 2024 calis
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I do like the mood, and how you did the broken colour, grungy feel of it. And how one could read the picture in several ways. Somehow I see a womans face in the upper left, and her hand touching her forehead coming from the lower right. An the other hand, there also could be a mouth, and parts of a chin in the lower right - the burn mark above forming a nose,- rest of the face got lost - and the woman in the upper left looking down on that face. Stories form in my head, seeing other possibilities - I like such pictures :)

For critic, as with your other image - the shadow and light parts are odd for the eyes. There's light on the frame, but complete darkness in the picture itself - for instance in the lower left. The frame has very sharp details, where the image is rather blurry, giving away that it's two different pictures combined. Apart from the tiny font - which is the only sharp element in the picture - and therefore feels sticked on top, rather than beeing a part of the image itself. The thing that bugs me the most, apart from the shadows - is how you dared to not show the whole frame - as it's a rather beautiful and baroque(?) one.

Take care, keep it up! =)